Thank you, Nickie Sage, for writing a couple Facebook posts that helped me crack an annoying bit of writer's block. It seemed right to give you an author credit. (I have never collaborated with an author before.)
“Air Show”
by Joe McCauley and Nickie Sage
The angel flew so low over the lake,
I could see its reflection in the water.
I had no camera right then, just did a lot of jumping and screaming. Me, not my kids, though my dogs were barking
like crazy. It flew like only twelve feet or so above the
lake, its wings, proud and strong, stretched perfectly straight from its
shoulders, horizontal over the water’s surface.
In an act of sheer will it tipped upward and barrel rolled into the
clouds above the lake, its blue robes camouflaging it so I had to really squint
to see it as it disappeared into the mantle of the sky.
My kids and I kept walking, me
practically skipping, my son and daughter meandering along where the lake met
the land, looking for good rocks and snail shells, accepting what they had seen
as part of their world. There was no
need for them to keep watching the sky for anything more. The world of children is filled with the
impossible which does not always, and does not need to, fit into an adult’s
view of everything. I kept to the path
with the dogs, barely watching where I walked, my eyes over the water, the
leash in one hand, my phone in the other, ready to snap some video, although
when the angel appeared again, all I could do was jump and scream once more as
it flew even lower this time and closer to the shore, riding some low current
of air. The wings weren’t what I
expected, not a brilliant white, but with the checkered pattern of a hawk’s or
a falcon’s, an archangel, clearly, though it wore no armor that I could
see. It kept its arms to its sides as it
flew and it was so close I could hear its blue robe flapping as it moved
through the air. I could see the angel’s
face with its gaze focused on the shining water, searching and so beautiful
that I almost cried right there, standing in the path. I yelled out at the kids to get them to look,
and they glanced up casually, said it was cool and went back to filling their
pockets with the shells of zebra mussels, the angel already a part of their
reality and having little more novelty than the raccoons that show up in our
trash cans each autumn.
The angel turned away from the shore,
increased its altitude, pumped its wings and flew out over the lake, rising
into the sky and once more disappearing.
Something told me this was all I’d see today, so I pulled on the dogs’
leashes and called the kids from the water
to walk home. In the elevator to
our floor I shut my eyes and tipped back my head, imagining.
The kids filled their father in on everything
once we got inside our unit. He asked me
about it, using the indulgent tone that all adults give their children when
they share stories of the fantasy that exists for them. My response came with some unintended irony,
as if by the retelling I had stopped believing.
My husband went back to making dinner as I unleashed the dogs and let
them loose in the kitchen to hover around his legs hoping for some kind of food
to drop from the counter. Leaving the
kitchen I walked over to one of the giant thick sheets of glass that made up
the exterior wall of our unit and looked out over the water. The next morning these windows would shake as
I was awakened by the sounding of trumpets from over the lake.
END
Thanks to everyone for the feedback. Overall it was very positive.
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun one to write, and it came pretty easily, which is nice.